I dedicated my junk journals to my sister who died 3 years ago, and I would like you to rate my digital junk journals pages

Hi there! im gabriele and im from italy, i recently started creating digital junk journals, it took me 3 years to start, because I was undecided whether to do it or not, because my sister julia who sadly died of covid, loved junk journals and always asked me to create one for her and she used to say me that i was good at creating them digitally, but i always said next time next time, but there never was a next time. so here I have opened an etsy shop dedicated to my sister julia, and with the profits of this shop I would like to finance charitable projects in favor of families who have lost their loved ones due to the covid, this is why I am posting almost every day new pages of junk journals and illustrations made by me. I wrote all this primarily to get rid of a weight that I had been carrying for the past 3 years, and also to ask for advice from the most expert of you on how to improve my art, because this is art Thanks to those who have read up till here and if you wanna support my shop write it, even a like on my listings will help me get my first sale and I hope I haven't broken any rules of the group, I don't write in formus much, forgive me ❤️

here's the link to my shop: https://www.etsy.com/shop/DigitalJunkJournals?ref=l2-about-shopname